Talk:Finishing the Hat/@comment-4396445-20120411220422/@comment-4396445-20120412161208

In my opinion, this is how the show should be. No, I am not joking, person above me and for you to ask me that offends me. I write fanfictions as a hobby and to have someone tell me there's so many issues they don't even know where to begin? Yeah... that's offensive. Please don't comment on my post and tell me there's so many issues with my writing that you don't even know where to begin. Especially when you don't even list the reasons.

Be lucky I am tolerant of people who offend my writing; be lucky I am a mature person who takes criticism lightly. Because if I took criticism seriously, and if I wasn't a mature person, I'd be notifying the administrators.

As for everyone else, thank you so much for the praise and constructive criticism. I didn't put Polly because I had a "brainfart" and, not to mention, I was typing too fast because this idea came to me on a "whim." I know Mary Beth didn't promote her engagement with Andrew because she found out that Andrew was using Mary, but I think that it would be more interesting and worth the audiences while if it were otherwise.